idea 2 - amy

Due to problems with our opening where we would have to film again we have decided that we are going to use another idea. We have chosen to do this because of the problems we had with the locations we used from the other scenes. We had Problems when using the office as staff had to be in the room at all times and one woman carried on working as we filmed which meant we had background noise and you could see the woman working in the background. we did not want this as we wanted the room to be empty.
our new idea is about a girl in the park alone, she looks at the swings and they are swinging on their own, the scene then switches to her and her mother  with her on the swings with her mum pushing them, in the background she is singing ring a ring a roses, and when it goes we all fall down it switches back to real life where she is sitting on the grass picking at it, then in the corner of the park there is a painting, she goes and picks it up and its a painting she remembers then the scene flashes to her in the house, she is painting a picture and shows her mum her picture and says how good it is. The girl then notices she has paint on her hands and goes to wash them, as she is washing her hands she can hear her mum scream downstairs. the scene then switches again back to the park were you can see her crying.

the story would then carry on from there as a mystery to what happened to her mum and how she died/went missing and the relationship her and her mum had.